The
initial edits for my manuscript are completed, and I’m about one third of the
way through inputting them for the next printed copy. I’ve added several more
passages to shore up weaknesses in the plot line, and I’ve spent some time
considering what I need to include for the story to mesh seamlessly in future
installments for the series.
With
all that said, I have to thank my wife for pointing out a serious error in the
series for me. I was missing out on a large area of one culture by only
showcasing their leadership. This made much of the tension in their part of the
story less believable, because they felt like bit players in comparison to the
other cultures.
As
a result, I’ve went back and started putting in chapters for a new character.
This girl is still closely attached to the ruling elite, but her storyline will
carry her to places that would have otherwise remained unexplored.
I
owe you a big thanks, Brittany. You’ve brought another portion of Cestre to
light that may never have been known outside the confines of my own mind.
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