Wednesday, October 29, 2014

Progress Report – Initial Readers, Here I Come!

It has been almost ten years since I had the dream that formed the beginnings of my novel. I wrote the first page when I was in college, saving it in a folder titled, “here is a book idea to get you started.” In June of last year, I decided to pick it back up when I was dusting off all my old writings.

I finished my initial draft several months back, and after several setbacks that left me behind my intended schedule, I finally got around to the dreaded editing process. I attacked this with gusto for the last few months, and then set back to writing a new character that I felt the story needed.

Edits, late nights, and borderline insanity came and went. I’m happy to say that the printer is chugging, and my first “official” draft is complete. Tomorrow, I will hand my book to my first test reader!

I have so many people to thank for listening to me along the way. My wife, Brittany, has been absolutely instrumental in keeping me motivated to this point. She was always happy to listen to parts of the story along the way, and I have spoiled almost every plot twist for her from start to finish. Josh Griffin and Elisabeth Perkins also get a big hand, for they listened when I really felt like I needed someone’s advice on the book.

I also owe it to the teachers along the way that helped me come to this completed manuscript. Mrs. Ford, my Kindergarten teacher, instilled a love for writing and reading in me that has carried through to this day. I also owe thanks to mom, for encouraging me to keep writing over the years when I was ready to just give up on my dream.

So look out initial readers, I’m coming for you starting tomorrow! Barring any major rewrites, I plan to start 2015 by looking for an agent to help sell my book.


All done, and just in time for NaNoWriMo!

Tuesday, October 14, 2014

Progress Report - Book Finished! Again...

For the second time, I am ticking off the “complete” box next to the first Dawnbringer book!

When I finished the first manuscript several months back I was discussing it with Brittany. She has been a great source of inspiration and insight when it comes to the inner workings of my book, and after one of our late night discussions I realized that I was missing a major story arc that I really needed to tell. The book takes place during a major war, and the entire civilian population of one side had been left out of the book. I was busy looking for a way to showcase some aspects of their society, and Brittany pointed out the potential solution that I wound up taking.

So here I am, another 40,000 words later, and the book is done…again…sort of…

I have to go back and do my edits now, and I have a handful of small chapters that still need to be written. Once all of this is finished, the book will be ready for initial readers. I’m hoping this will happen over the weekend, but if I’ve learned anything through the book writing process, it’s that patience is an important virtue.


Stay tuned!

Thursday, October 9, 2014

Poem – Deliver Me

In my mind, poetry should speak honestly before all else. Without exposing raw emotion, it really falls short of showcasing the truest bits of our humanity.

With that in mind, I’ve written a more frustrated piece this week, hearkening to several weeks of hard knocks. The purpose was merely to vent some of the mounting frustrations that I had been facing.

In my desire to expose some element of raw emotion, I hope it delivers.

Deliver Me

Deliver me, O Lord
From a world of indifference
Cold numbers and statistics
Mark what should be much more
Cold slabs of meat
All that remains of humanity
Carcasses, still drawing breath
In a world of jaded despair
Where went our basic dignity
And respect for one another?
Lost, like the teachings of the Law
In that cursed Israelite generation
I scream, I cry, I rail
Cannot anybody hear me?
Songbird’s call drowned out
In the buzz of monotonous gray

Lord, please deliver me.

Randall Madden

October 2, 2014